Audience Research- Updates

With posting the animatic on the group i asked questions;
whats good about it?
What could be improved?
does it tell the story well?
What bits don't you get

We got some feedback form Beth and Lauren today

Beth Marler the drawings are clear and easy to understand.
the title creates the mood to what is happening.

improved- music lasting length of title sequence.
yes, gives an idea of what is going to happen

 

Lauren Hornabrook the way that the pictures run into each other smoothly is really good, and the link with the music is really effective.

 maybe to improve it you could of added colour? although the use of black and white helps to add to the mood.· i think it tells the story really well and there isnt really anything that i dont understand about it