In the scene where the four girls are together we have decided to add in some dialogue to make the storyline more interesting and to introduce more characters.
(The four girls are all sat in the living room of one of the girl’s houses they are all talking and having a few drinks. Lauren stands up to leave)
Maria:
(All the girls are concerned)
What have you done with the wallet Lauren? Why did you steal it?
Kate:
Be careful please Lauren, I personally think you should either hand it in to the police or give it back...
Laura:
Yes please do you might not be able to get out of this situation and it will just get you into trouble.
Lauren:
(Lauren doesn’t seem to be listening)
Okay, okay thanks for your advice but he needs to be taught a lesson! Thinking he can go around acting like he owns every women! He should be locked up!
Maria:
(Maria talks while looking down)
Yes I suppose so, but he obviously isn't a very friendly person.
Lauren:
Okay well I have got to get home, see ya.
(Lauren smiles as she leaves as everyone else looks un-convinced)
Kate, Laura:
Bye
Maria:
See you later.
(The front door slams shut as Lauren walks out
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